I Wish I Believe It.
(Distances Don’t Do People Apart)
She told me, not once –
"Distances don’t do people apart"
And it put me wondering from the start,
That have I ever believed it-hence?
It is such relative, isn’t it?
Which frame you wish to refer to?
And then you can actually see through,
That it’s working sphere is restricted.
In physical sense, you might consider affirmation,
For here alone bridges construct & rules bend.
But abstract makes it look translucent,
For the void surpasses dimensions!
And this is one aspect where even time,
Widens the gap, instead of healing it.
Even your physical presence can be substituted,
Only what matters is, how well you rhyme.
Then too, With all the love at my command,
I wish I believe it, hence.
Cause she has told it to me, not once,
"Distances don’t do people apart"
5 comments:
I remember you wrote poems in school also. Its a nice compilation.
distances don't do people apart
i agree
-robin paul
"hopin distances don't do people apart"
nice work .. all the inputs from Murabs, Roys ,Guhas and Rodrigues precisely put into effect ;)
keep up the good work !!!
"Out of sight out of mind"... yes distances do make ppl drift apart... But only those who are in the mind and not those in the heart.....
U and i have been seperated for looooong but still the distance dos'nt matter.
So just make sure that the ppl u wanna keep thru ur life, (Spl those who are far far away) are in ur heart. Also make sure that the ppl whom u always want in ur life have u in their hearts.
I hope u understand what i meant ter say... so keep cool bro after all e both are in the same BOAT (ok ok Urs is a SHIP).
Ciao
Take care
ur BIG bro
Peter
i agree distances dont do ppl apart.. nice compilation...
nice job man!
Tanmay
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